Fintech Promotional Email Template

This is a competent functional email that clearly guides the user to the next step, but it suffers from a lack of excitement and 'bureaucratic' framing. The biggest strength is the clean layout and clear secondary support options. The biggest weakness is the 'Hi [Name]' headline and the dry focus on 'Pre-Contract Information' (PCI) without reminding the user of the 'freedom from bill stress' benefit awaiting them.